Review: Rachel and the Many-Splendored Dreamland, by L Jagi Lamplighter
The weight of whole worlds is on her tiny, 13-year-old shoulders … This isn't even counting school work.
Poor Rachel Griffin. She's spent the last six weeks going through a lot of trauma. She's been sent to the infirmary so much, she's bucking for a record. She holds secrets that could destroy the universe. Friends have died. She’s been shot at more than most veteran police officers.
We won’t even touch on the dragons, the death cults, the demons, the angels, the elves, gods or monsters. The weight of whole worlds is on her tiny, 13-year-old shoulders …
This isn't even counting school work. Welcome to round three of the Rachel Griffin novels, Rachel and the Many-Splendored Dreamland
The story
Where do we start?
Let's start with some SPOILERS FOR BOOKS ONE AND TWO....Yes, you'd think after my The Raven the Elf and Rachel review, that would have been spoilery. It seriously, seriously isn't.
So, Rachel has defeated a demon, fought off a death cult — twice — including a dragon. Surely the cult out to destroy the world is no longer a problem, right?
Right?
Oh. Wrong. So very, very wrong.
Due to a magical experiment gone wrong, Rachel ends up in Transylvania, and the children of the night are restless. Due to circumstances beyond their control, a demon is unleashed. This is Morax … servant of Moloch. If you don't know what Moloch is, then read through the book, and expect it to go dark. And by dark, I mean “When did early Peter Jackson start directing this film?”
Let's just say that, during the climax of the novel, there is a scene that Ray Harryhausen and Sam Raimi would have loved, because there's going to be an army of darkness, with no Bruce Campbell. And I was looking for a chainsaw.
Rachel and the Many-Splendored Dreamland wraps up many of the plot points in a neat little bow. The main plots of the book are neatly cleaned up. But that never stopped Rachel from getting into trouble, usually on the same exact day the last book ended. And there are still enough dangling threads that show some of where book 4 is going to go: more interpersonal complications to wrap up, psychological damage to at least two of our main characters to fix, as well as the hole in the world that needs to be dealt with.
Heck, we’ve barely touched on a violent episode that happened back in book 1, but was revealed in book 2, and only barely mentioned later on… Right now, I don't know if I approve, or disapprove of how it's being handled, or not handled, as the case may be. I'll bring it up in a later review, should they focus on it some more.
The characters
Now, I'm not going to say there's a shootout every 25 pages … but there’s at least a shootout every 50 or so. Though this one also places an emphasis on emotional conflict, internally and externally. The Magical Princess of Magical Australia is magically annoying at times, and is getting into problems with Sigfried, who is one part Dickens Character, and one part Parker from Leverage. And, of course, Rachel has to deal with all of the various and sundry crap she never dealt with from the first two novels — ie: she’s dealt with none of the trauma she's already gone through. Because that'll make for a mentally healthy 13 year old.
I do so enjoy these books. There is no question of Rachel just happening along as she trips over the solutions to problems. Rachel is a highly active character. She knows there is an enemy, and is doing everything in her power to stop it. It's highly refreshing after certain other YA novels spend most of their time overhearing just the right conversation to get some detail, and have some Hermione look up the data for them.
It's also nice to see that, in all three of these novels, the adults aren't completely useless. In fact, they're doing something odd — like THEIR JOBS. The adults have a learning curve. Like "Gee, maybe we should listen to the children here." Or even better: "Hey! Maybe we should give our kid a fast-acting wand to shoot spells against the bad guys who seem to be actively out to kill them." The adults here are at least smart enough to conclude that, yes, the kids really are in danger, they really do know that something is going on, and the next time something like this happens -- because it's obvious even to the characters in universe that something is going on -- that the kids should be allowed to defend themselves…
… I didn't realize this while reading it, but looking over that paragraph makes me think this novel has a Second Amendment commercial in there somewhere.
The world
This world. Wow. There's a lot to unpack. And dang, the references. I wish I could tell you all of the references. From comic books to Norse and Greek mythology, to Biblical in-jokes about the Temple of the Unnamed god (for you biblical type folks who read it, think Saint Paul in Athens). We won't even go into the lion the size of a plushy doll. I'm trying to figure out if Jagi is amazingly subtle, or hitting readers over the head with a brick. I guess it depends on if you're an information sponge, like me.
If there is a mythology Jagi hasn't built into this world, I can't think of it offhand.
Rachel and the Many-Splendored Dreamland also expands the world. We know more of the culture of Australia and Transylvania, and even hints at Bavaria. More importantly, we get more and more glimpses at what the "World of the Unwary" looks like, from cops to how historical events are handled.
The politics
I think I covered the "politics" at the high-capacity wands. This is a fantasy set in an alternate history. Any politics are strictly that of the world.
But if you're offended that Aslan is a character... you're a killjoy and you shouldn't even be reading books.
Content warning
This is going to get creepy by the end. Not quite Evil Dead creepy, but "human sacrifice" and "skeletal armies crawling out of the dirt" put this solidly in the "probably not for children" camp. (Unless you're a weirdo like me who ready Mary Stewart and TH White when I was 12.)
Who is it for?
This is for anyone who enjoys Urban Fantasy, alternate histories, inventive uses of magic, and deep mythology... all wrapped up with white-knuckle action and emotional depth of characters. This is definitely PG-13. Yes, children can read it, but I do recommend reading the climax of this novel in daylight.
If you want something more in the magic school genre, this should satisfy you. If you think that genre is too shallow, this should also satisfy you.
YA novels have suffered very badly from the influx of young "starter" writers and older midlist writers who fondly imagine that writing for teens is easier and demands less quality. And that woke can substitute for characterization, or setting, or deft handling of A/B plot structure.
Teen lit was diverse, interesting, and fun to read until the above people (the same ones who colonized gaming) discovered it was the only publishing field still being widely read by adults. Sure it lacked depth, but...
The DIE of publishing and editing, using blacks as human shields, five years after they went all-in resulted in a girl-boss whitewashing of editors. The only group that increased pace the "diversity audit" was lesbians. So quality-control and novice author guidance starts tanking. And that's without the colonization of DIE hire "teen librarians" by studies-grads who get a quick MLS so they can move into not gate-keeping teen lit for virtue or quality. All they can do is social justice, so...
Indy has our backs, though.